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I like the common theme of being on the unsure waters, swallowed by anxiety, but then seeing the mountain emerge throught the fog. On your allusion to Jonah, you could have gone a little more in depth, because the common thought of Jonah is one who runs from the problem, not one who is looking to confront it. Could have used more variety of rhetorc devices. -John W.

The theme of change and going to college is easily relatable to all high school students so it is easy for us to compare our own lives with this poem. The allusion to Jonah was a little random and struck me as something jammed into the poem forcefully at the last second, but other than that, it was a very nice piece of art. -Tyler W